"No!" yelled Taylor, but the thief ignored her. He simply pushed his way through the door and locked it so the girls and Ms. Rachel couldn't get in behind him.
"The back door," suggested Shenice, but a moment later they discovered it was locked too.
"Girls," said Ms. Rachel, "I want you to go home. I'm going next door to call the police."
Ms. Rachel left but instead of going home, Shenice and Taylor crawled through the window and began to look for the thief.
Just as they began to think he had left, they turned around to see him drawing a gun!
"The back door," suggested Shenice, but a moment later they discovered it was locked too. "Girls," said Ms. Rachel, "I want you to go home. I'm going next door to call the police."
Ms. Rachel left but instead of going home, Shenice and Taylor crawled through the window and began to look for the thief.
Just as they began to think he had left, they turned around to see him drawing a gun!
16 comments:
Great story. Wondering is this Charis writing or Renae writing.
Hello Anonymous! I promise this is not my Mom this is me.
Charis
Hello, Anonymous! Charis wanted me to assure you that this is HER blog. She is the writer, not me. I would never have brought a gun into the story! LOL
--Renae
Charis' mom
Sorry.... the gun, that was why i thought you must of wrote this and not a child. Please tell Charis she is a blessed writer .Hurry tell us more darling.
Charis,are the girls safe?? hurry with the next part.
Anonymous, So glad you are enjoying Charis' story. She is a gifted writer! I tell her that often, but it's nice to hear it from someone else.
Please tell us who you are. ;-)
Thank you.
Charis' Mom, Renae
Hi, my name is April... i'm 14 and live in Flordia. a friend told me about this site. I Just happen to see this blog and continued to follow.I have enjoyed Charis story ,can't wait to read more.SOOO
sorry i thought it was her mom writing.
So...what happens next? Are the girls alright?
Waiting....oh whats going to happen ?
Samantha ,
I need to know more!!!!
:)
caitlyn
Shenice and Taylor must be recovering in hospital! Or maybe -- oh no! Surely not! I should have checked the obits before I started my comment!
Oh goodness when shall we hear more? What happen to the poor girls ?
Renae hurry tell us more .What happen's to the girls ?
Sally,
Dallas Tx.
Hi Sally. My mom isn't writing this, I am. Thanks for stopping by. I'll try to post soon.
Charis :-)
hey charis!
I just need to know more!
go check out my blog!
www.walikngtalkingfaith.blogspot.com
your cousin
Caitlyn
aHA!
If one mystery doesn't get solved on this blog, another does....
so, "Caitlyn" is a cousin!
Post a Comment